Ten Little Chances to be Free (
tenlittlebullets) wrote2011-05-23 05:42 pm
Soliciting vid feedback.
Going back and cleaning up Misery Loves Company a little--flist, I need your help with con crit, as I have never vidded before and am still a n00b to the stylistic issues involved. If there's anything in there that strikes you as sloppy and easily fixable, please tell me! I already have a laundry list of fixes, but would be interested to see what other people think is off, be it wobbly timing or talky face* or a section that kind of drags.
* IT IS REALLY HARD TO GET CLIPS OF UTOPIA THAT DO NOT HAVE PEOPLE TALKING OKAY. I'm working on it. It's first on my list. But a certain amount of it is unavoidable.
* IT IS REALLY HARD TO GET CLIPS OF UTOPIA THAT DO NOT HAVE PEOPLE TALKING OKAY. I'm working on it. It's first on my list. But a certain amount of it is unavoidable.
